Ideal Idolater Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Ideal Idolater

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Ideal idolater met us once in a temple,
Idealism he described nonstop in ample.
'Idealize yourselves', he said us in eager,
'Identify yourselves and don't be beggar.

Immediately a beggar stood in front of him,
Ignoring him he said, “You are strong and vim'.
Ill-starred beggar had one hand and no eye at all,
Immorally he was begging to meet hunger's call.

'Idle you are', said idolater to him,
'Idiotically you beg, don't be dim'.
'Ill-fated I'm not I am enjoying my past deeds',
Impassively he said describing his greeds.

'Impact of past actions never goes alone,
It always goes with soul to next birth zone.
Impartially you behave as idolater to all,
Impatiently you shouldn't do anything at all.

Imparted sweet food he had with him to us,
In-depth he said, “Have these offering God thus'.
I thought beggar is more ideal than the idolater,
Immense love he has on God, a best facilitator.

Monday, June 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet’s Note about the Poem
Once with friends poet met an idolater in a temple. He advised them to be idealizing themselves. They should not be beggar and should be identified themselves to be noble person. At that time a beggar arrived there. Idolater said him that he was vim and he should not beg. The beggar had one hand and he was blind. He was unwillingly begging to meet the call of hunger. He said it was going on due to his past life’s actions. “Past action or Karma always goes with soul”, he said, ” so one should not do wrong”. He then gave them sweet food with him and said to have it by offering to God first. He had immense love to all and to God. Poet thought that the beggar was the real ideal idolater. This is the theme of the poem in nutshell. It is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.

Glossary
Idolater - one who worship idols
Dim - stupid
Ill-starred - unlucky
Impassively – not easily moved by strong feeling
In-depth - thorough
Idiotically - in a idiotic manner
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 22 June 2015

The ostentatious have their reward on earth for their shows' of worship. But the humble will find a greater reward. Nicely written, Kumarmani. Thanks for sharing

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Ayman Parray 12 July 2015

What I wanted to say Mr Kelly Kurt has said better- Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul. for sharing this wonderful poem.

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Sekharan Pookkat 22 June 2015

hearty offerings are worships towards god

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Lyn Paul 25 June 2015

Thank you for your beautiful flow of words of worship.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 27 June 2015

Pride and humility are the contradictory traits that define ourselves. God and the society love the humble.Beautifully penned

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Pushpendra Patel 12 February 2019

This title of the poem has motivational power. I love the expression and feel beauty of this poem. Thank you very much for sharing this.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 October 2018

Impact of past actions! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2016

picture of craig moore xenjoyed. 22 Jun 2015 by craig moore | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x.........nice write, and so true, people having the least have the kindest hearts ★ 22 Jun 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Scott Hemingway xLoving read there. 22 Jun 2015 by Scott Hemingway | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xAwww really appreciate your wonderful poems... believe some are a temple, , we just need to dig in to see....hugs darling xoxoxo xxoxoxo blessings to you Lways 22 Jun 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xVery well done! 23 Jun 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply

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Akhtar Jawad 04 July 2015

A thoughtful poem, liked it.

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You have contrasted pompous behaviour and humility very well in this poem. A thought-provoking write, Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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