I will call your name, skepi,
I will pronounce your name, skepi
Skepi, your name is like honey bread
In the inner of my heart
Which dropp joy in my mind every minutes
And it provide million of sweet for my tongue every hours
your physical charms show the pleasure fruit
Of great delight in your life,
You lass; I admire both day and your night
Skepi, my affection will show you
Way of peace and night of your joy,
I will drive you to the point
Of your dream in life,
Forever you shall sing song
To the bed of heart
As a love poem, this is okay but only the theme of love doesn't make the complete sense of poetry. I come across with a lot of love poems. The central theme remins the same and it gives the sense of repetition. Look around you and you can find umpteen themes to write about. Read good poetry and you will come to know how to present your verse. Reading, writing and editing our own works- only with it, good poetry is ever born. I do a lot of editing work to my own poetry before every poem is posted. Read and read. There is no replacement to it. Then, there is a stage of digestion. Then, there is a stage of reproduction. Surging winds will wake deep within. We can find our own simple and effective language to present our theme. Best of luck
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A good write! Comments of Mr. Ravi A may be considered seriously.