I Want To... Poem by Noel Horlanda

I Want To...

Rating: 5.0


want to care for you as much as
you care for me
want to be true to you
more than you do
want to love you more
as much as you love me
want to kiss you all day long
‘til you say no more
want to embrace you so tight
‘til you say enough!
want to make love to you
more than you desire
want to die for you as much as
as you’re ready to die for me
want to caress you more
‘til you sigh for joy
want to give my life for you
more than you do
want to give everything I own
more than your own
want to be… your man
now and forever.

Again for the last time…
I want to be your man now and forever…
Dammit! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 June 2010

Readers fell from heights of ‘MORE~MORE~MORE’ finally Dammit! ! ! Wow! Gosh! ! Climaxed and culminated in pain Ms. Nivedita UK

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Meggie Gultiano 11 January 2010

wow..and I say again wow..very romantic piece..but i don't like your last line..LOL(joke)

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Aira Olayvar 11 January 2010

Ahhhhhh… your “I want to” is so wow! I have almost envied her whom this poem is dedicated… but the last sentence caused me a little bit of discouragement… “damnit” thing… it carries away the sincerity. Anyways, just feel free to express your emotions, males have different ways in doing it anyway. :) I'll be reading here...

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Noel Horlanda

Noel Horlanda

Bohol, Philippines
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