I'Ve Been Thinking About You ~* Poem by Thad Wilk

I'Ve Been Thinking About You ~*

Rating: 3.0


They say a grown man never cries
This makes no sense to me at all
Without you, I know many tears would fall
Like rain in torrents, from the skies
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Nothing would be the same again for me
Nothing, like it was it was before
I would surely die in this salty sea
If I could not have you anymore
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Each passing day, more tears they'd bring
In your hands you hold my heart
You are my all, my everything
I'd cry an ocean, were we to part
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They say a grown man never cries
They've never known a love this true
True love they haven't yet, to realize
For they've never felt the way I feel for you.

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~TJW~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 29 September 2009

Thad, nice to see you around again. Men do cry, I for one have done it many times over the loss of someone I loved. Beautiful said my friend. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us. All the best. David

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Indira Babbellapati 29 September 2009

feels good to bump into u after long. yes, i hate this concept of men shouldn't cry...not to think of grown men. you put it excellently that tears are asexual...

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Tia Maria 29 September 2009

Ah friend Thad - lovely words. Beautiful poetry: -) All the best, T

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