I Thought I Loved You Poem by Christopher Biddle

I Thought I Loved You



I've commited no evil
I've done no sin
So, when Im farthest from losing
Still, I never win.

Im always the loser
No matter what
But I refuse to surrender
I refuse to cut

I will not cry
I won't give you that pleasure
That's sick and thats twisted
My fake lil treasure

What you did was cruel
But ill get over it soon
I'll sit out in the rain
& stare at the moon

Go have your fun
Don't worry about me
I'm fine, I'll move on
I don't need your symapathy

Even though you caused this heartache
And you caused this pain
Just promise me this...

Don't ever love me again!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyease Collins 13 October 2008

Excellent poem. I really liked it. I love emotion. Good Job -Tyease

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Bethany Buhl 13 October 2008

Good for you for getting rid of something you don't really need and not giving them the satisfaction of knowing that they hurt you as much as they did and I would give you a hug but I think that would be kind weird.

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