I Shouldn'T Believe You God! ! Poem by Niharica Bhardwaj

I Shouldn'T Believe You God! !

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I shouldn't believe you God,
sugars have turned rancid,
lemons have curdled
water's turned acid.

Burning oil pouring on land,
stones have sweat,
no greens on tree hand,
flowers have ashes of heat.

Sun's glory is trembling,
breeze is still like rock,
chirps feel like bee sting,
black shadows stalk.

But I still believe you, O, ever placid,
for not all sugars will turn rancid.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jinal Jobanputra 03 October 2007

This poem is the first one to go to myfavourites............it is a sad poem with an optimistic end.........IMPRESSIVE

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Amrit Mishra 04 July 2007

Hmmm.... nice to see the initial despair giving way to hope in the end.

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