I Remember..... Poem by Rudy Hossam

I Remember.....

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I remember you used to look at me,
You used to give me that smile,
It made me forget everything around,
But everything changes,
Like how the sun comes and goes,
Unfortunately you changed,
So I'd to change too.

I'd no choice but to look around,
To look for someone who really needs me,
Who really cares about me,
Who really wants to spend the rest of my life with him,
Who is really desperate 'cause I didn't used to be with him,
So he is going to do his best to let me be his.

I looked a lot until I found that guy,
But it was a shock to me,
When I realized that that guy was you,
You changed alright,
But you still wanted me to be part of your life,
-to be all of your life-.

And that feeling came back up,
When I walked away,
I also realized that........that I can't live without you........
That I only need you........that I'll only be with you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 05 September 2008

Found true love...now reminiscing the precious moments of your life...beautiful piece.

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Reshma Ramesh 21 October 2008

all the things we say and do when we are in love...........well penned

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Sebastine Humaemo 06 February 2009

well penned Rudy...............best of your best..........like life a circle.........this love ended where t strtd.....good write..........10+++++++ sebastine

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sumaira .....ir 17 January 2009

It remembered me my first love that teen age feelings wow lovely poem dear

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Jihad T 16 January 2009

i've read it more than 4 times you desreve not at lease 10+++++++++++

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XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! 31 December 2008

love can be really powerful and at times you just got to let all out 10++

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Rachael Hardy 31 December 2008

Love can be very powerful...This is a beautiful poem...

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