I Remained Standstill Poem by ANJANDEV ROY

I Remained Standstill

Rating: 5.0


I asked the great pilgrim,
'Will you listen to me? '
The eminent pilgrim smiled
And gently said to me,
'I have already listened to thee, '
I remained standstill.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 18 May 2023

I remained standstill....you have no alternative choice there! A wonderful poem. Top score!

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Richard Wlodarski 21 May 2023

Your philosophical/spiritual poetry appears to be coming from your meditation experiences. If so, keep listening to the spiritual guides that are assisting you in writing such inspirational poems.

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Beautifully expressed

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S H 18 May 2023

Rather be expressive. Your view-point taken.

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Rajan T Renganathan 18 May 2023

To listen is to obey, wise words.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 May 2023

Wonderful Anjandev I can't breathe with this excitement

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