I Quote Poem by Brianna Trombley

I Quote

Rating: 5.0


I could say im never worried
Say i know you'll be ok
But i would be pretending
For you, every night i pray

Although you act like nothings wrong
You smile and say your fine
I can see right through you
You sometimes wish to cross the line

You look me in the eyes
And claim you're past that phase
But what you say and how you feel
Are two totally different things

For when i am around you
I wish i knew just what to say
To make you see things clearly
Wish to live another day

For that i call on God
To help you win this fight
Help to make me strong for you
Help bring you to the light

The two of us together,
Our love for you combined
Shall be enough to fight the darkness
Make you better in time

For with his help i know
That losing you, i won't
Im here for you forever and always
My promise, i quote

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 13 May 2009

good write...thanks...10

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This is a really heartfelt piece Brianna. It gives hope for a better change in circumstances. You have rhymed it all and I enjoyed it! Karin Anderson

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Kimber Harrison 02 May 2009

You can really feal the emotion put into it. Some of the stanza's are a little rusty, but it's an altogether GREAT poem! :)

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Ency Bearis 02 May 2009

A nice soliloquy write....well expressed...and significant...10

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the flow and sequence is just perfect for the poem..which is magnificent

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