I'M Sorry Poem by Lacey Saulisbury

I'M Sorry



Tears are falling,
From beautiful eyes.
Tears are falling,
Because of my lies.

Tears are falling,
Because of what I said.
Tears are falling,
Into this bed.

Tears are falling,
In a beautiful stream.
Tears are falling,
Because of a your dream.

Tears are falling,
Because of my lies.
Tears are falling,
As this beautiful dies.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barry A. Lanier 26 April 2009

Very good flow structure and content for this aspiring poet.....also a cognizant and behavioral approach to understanding..

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