I'M Always Here When Needed Poem by Brianna Wilkinson

I'M Always Here When Needed

Rating: 2.0


I want to make things better,
yes I want to make them right.
But there's nothing I can do,
I really don't want to fight.

Can't she see what shes doing?
hurting you that way...
shes so oblivious,
Don't you want to make her pay?

you pawn it off as nothing,
act as if everything's all right
I pretend I don't see any of the pain you try to hide.
but eventually things will eat you up....
yes they'll rot you from inside.

I hate to see you hurting,
i want to save you now.
But its not up to me,
and I don't really know how.

I offer you all I have,
a kiss, a hug or too.
But the greatest thing I have,
is the overbearing love for YOU

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daryl Young 23 March 2009

This is really cool, and I love the angle of somebody else talking about what they see. Then becoming part of it in the end. Loved the flow and wording. I enjoyed it a lot. Please read and comment on my works. Rabbit

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Sandra Martyres 16 March 2009

A very touching piece indeed -10

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