I Love When You Do That Poem by XxAmieLee xX

I Love When You Do That

Rating: 5.0


Come here, touch me,
I love it when you do that.
Come here, whisper in my ear,
I love it when you do that.

Come here, kiss me,
I love it when you do that.
Come here, tell me I'm the only one,
I love it when you do that.

Go away, just leave me alone,
I love it when you do that.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 18 September 2007

It's good to see your sense of humour peeping through this piece. Good flow and a satisfying ending. love, Allie xxxx

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 16 September 2007

good work. The ending was harsh, but cute.

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Angela Barker 12 September 2007

Loved the ending, pun intended.

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Marcia Morris 12 September 2007

Nice little write. The ending made me giggle a bit.

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