I Live In You. Poem by Ankur Shrivastava
I Live In You.
My love dwells in your heart
Like a baby in the womb
Of surrogate mother,
Unwanted, perhaps not cherished
Yet nurtured with great care,
Arising emotions conflicting,
Yet so tender;
I live in you.
Thursday, March 22, 2007
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Lal Parameswar
22 March 2007
Nice but why can't you write it in a rhyming way? If this is your style, then kudos...
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4/26/2024 12:57:58 PM # 1.0.0.1119
The reference to the baby in the womb of a surrogate mother is definitely the high point. And i sir agree with Lal sir and think that rhyme wasn't needed! Preets