I Can'T Believe Poem by Selina Gurgacz

I Can'T Believe

Rating: 5.0


I can't believe,
That nobody listens to me,
To what I have to say.
I can't believe,
That there is nobody to talk to,
When I need to be able to talk to someone.
I can't believe,
That your not here,
Not talking to me,
Not acknowledging me.
I can't believe,
That you would ignore me,
When I need you the most.
I can't believe,
I can't believe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 22 November 2007

This poem is written from the heart. You can feel it. It also flows really well. The repetition of 'I can't believe' emphasizes your angst and outrage. Strong gusty writing. love, Allie xxxx

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