Humming Love Poem by Rini Shibu

Humming Love

Rating: 4.8


My heart humming  a love song
With  blue throated hummingbird
Hovering over, flapping the wings
Sweet chirps and beeps are enchanting

Heart beats faster near scented foliage
Searching along the soft breeze
Hunting sweet nectar from honey suckles
When sun shines and kisses the breeze.

Preaching and humming on cherry blossom
Watching through the dew drops
Your hum interrupts the vulnerables
Your ultrasonic songs are delighting.

Humming Love
Sunday, May 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 04 June 2017

Very beautiful and enjoyable poem.

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Rini Shibu 04 June 2017

Thanks a lot...

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Daniel Brick 02 June 2017

Your poem shows a profound and love reacts with equal. There is no room for doubt or confusion. Oh, blessed state of being! You create in words a safe haven for this pure love, a place without a forbidden tree or a treacherous snake - unless both will be revealed later. rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

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Rini Shibu 02 June 2017

Thanks a lot Daniel...

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Dev Anand 31 May 2017

Hunting sweet nectar from honey suckles When sun shines and kisses the breeze. sucking honey.. nice expressions sensing the eros in it.. dev

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Rini Shibu 31 May 2017

Thank you...

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Gajanan Mishra 31 May 2017

great love, cherry blossom

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Rini Shibu 31 May 2017

Thank you....

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Siddartha Montik 29 May 2017

Sweet Humming.. glorifying that little bird as well our own silent humming for love not heard like ultrasonic sounds, swept away in the busy bustling way of present life and life-styles! ! Pure thoughts well written! thank you 10+++!

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Rini Shibu 29 May 2017

Thanks for ur good comments..

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