However, Mothers Loved To Babies Poem by Chaminda Pushpadewa

However, Mothers Loved To Babies

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Sun loved to earth
Every morning beamed for warmth the earth
Moon loved to darkness
Stars loved to sky

The waves loved to beach
Wind loved to trees
Rivers loved to trees
Clouds loved to mountains

Will be losing earth from the sun
Will be moving moon far away from the earth
Will be drying every river after 100 years
Although mothers loved to babies

Will be filling seawater over the land
Will be cutting every tree by people at the future
Will be dropped stars to the earth
Although mothers love never, off from the babies

Sunday, June 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: mother and child
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2018

Although mothers love never, off from the babies....... the culmination and the intention of your poem is at the end. lovely comaparisons.. my dear poet. thank u. this is a fine poem.- tony

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