Horizon Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Horizon

Rating: 5.0


Slip off into a place, where I can
watch the wind blow. There, I can let
my heart go. Out amongst the willows
and, cat tails. Life awakes under a
golden, veil. With the echoing sounds
of a distant, quaint quail. Out amongst,
where ancient leaves, sail..And the rest,
of the sounds, of the human world, fail.
Out amongst, the enchanted woods, and
endless, trails.. Out where, the oceans
waves, whisper their tales.. Out there..
Out There...Somewhere...

Thursday, November 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,feel,nature,peaceful
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 09 November 2017

This is a very nice poem about horizon.

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Rebecca Navarre 14 November 2017

Thank You! ! ! Lamar, For Your Words So Kind! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Ever So Beautiful To Find! ! ! ! ! Touching The Hearts And Minds Of All Who Come By! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 February 2021

Appreciated and admired. To MyPoemList

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 February 2021

An excellent poem! So well composed.

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Jette Blackstone 18 November 2017

A very nice place to be and an elegant embedded rhyme scheme. To be out in nature is the best. Thanks for sharing Rebecca. Peace.

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Rebecca Navarre 18 November 2017

Thank You! ! ! Jette, For Visiting, And Such A Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! I Look Forward To Visiting Your Poetry Page! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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George Dietz 17 November 2017

Wish I could be there now! Like a lot of your poems you truly immerse the reader to go wherever they need or dream! Great work

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Rebecca Navarre 17 November 2017

Thank You! ! ! George, For Such A Very Beautifully Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Ever So Touches Heart And Soul! ! ! ! ! With The Beautiful Words You Etch And Sew! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 November 2017

Hi Becca, Slip off...... : : : Slip off into a place, where I can watch the wind blow: : : Marvelous...

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Rebecca Navarre 16 November 2017

Thank You! ! ! Unnikrishnan, For Such An Ever So Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! :) Your Poetry Touches Hearts, Touches Skies, Touches Rivers, And Mountains, Across Country Sides! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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