Horizon Poem by Jack Oates

Horizon

Rating: 5.0


I see the sea the sea is me and up above the sea the sky -
the sky is I -
and in between the line unseen.
The sailor's stitch, the traveller's twitch,
the fisher's dish,
the broken hearted gazer's melancholy wish.

We three: the me the sea the I the sky;
the endless brine,
the high azure, the green allure,
the maw and caw of teals and terns.
The line discerns
no others but the brothers in our holy trinity.

I dive. I die.
A tattered trine.
Just me, the sea; no sky. No I.
A tightened twine,
a hook, a fly.
A gift divine - I bite the lie.
A pull. A cry.
A stranded break; the sea forsakes
the I, the sky.
From death, to breath.
The line is broke - I churn, I choke.
The tendon's torn.
A yawp, a yawn.

I am reborn.

I see the sea the sea is me
and up above the sea the sky -
the sky is I -
and in between the line unseen.
The paddlers play, the Sadhus pray;
the peddlars hawk
their nuts from huts beside the burning flesh.

We three: the me the sea the I the sky;
the shuttered spy,
Varuna's lye, Surya's wings.
The rani sings of humid kings
and gods up high
stretch the string to keep abyssal monks at bay.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 16 September 2011

Amazing! Jack! A wonderful, well penned and poignant write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with more of such thought provoking writes! If time permits, please, read my poem titled like yours: A NEW HORIZON, hoping that you will enjoy it as much as I honestly enjoyed yours! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Elizabeth Thomson 16 September 2011

Wow this is so beautiful! i love how you personified the horizon and everything it could be. because in life we all reach for the horizon, but it always will be unreachable ahead of us because when one is conquered another found! :)

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