Hoping To Reach The Oasis Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Hoping To Reach The Oasis

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Hoping to reach the oasis,
I was lead
By the empty flask.

That waterless flask led me
Through the sands,
And suffocating dust.

Don’t eye the sun
With your sad eyes,
Don’t stare…

My locks are faded
Just by
Your glare.

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Lamont Palmer 18 December 2009

Nicely imagistic and I good comment on the trajectory of relationships, perhaps.

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Greenwolfe 1962 02 July 2008

Here is another poem where I reveal my stupidity. I don't know what it means. There must be a story here or a meaning of some kind. If this has meaning, then whatever anyone writes has meaning. And all meaning is without. GW62

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i like this poem it is very powerful

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