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Hope Remains

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His face for so long, he has hid,
because disappointed greatly, we did.
For we disobeyed, the words of his voice,
and now all around, is the error of that choice.
So much death, hate, pain and fear,
and more and more, new horrors appear.
Yet still we rebel, and will listen not,
seems common sense, have many forgot.
Continuing to live life, anyway they choose,
never realizing, what they're about to lose.
But so loved he, that another chance he gave,
to save us from, that eternal grave.
And to lead us back, does he always try
for there is no pleasure, to see a loved one die.
And where breath is, shall hope remain,
so make not his effort, all in vain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Adamyan 29 June 2009

great indeed. thx for writing this

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Christopher Flynn 06 June 2009

Let hope reign and lets not forget all in life is a test. Nice poem :)

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