Hold Me Close Poem by Tondalaya Jefferson

Hold Me Close

Rating: 4.5


Hold me close
Don't take your eyes off me
I know
I'll go slow
Here we go

Its hard to think that life goes on
And you will find that someone
When I'm gone
Promise me I'll always be here
Near and dear
Don't hold 2 tight you'll loose ur life
Shh no one knows

Hold me close
Don't take your eyes off me
I know
I'll go slow
Here we go

Don't hold your breath
It's too short
And you'll know
That tomorrows for you
All alone
My fears are finally confirmed
Shhh they all know

Hold me close
Don't take your eyes off me
I know
I'll go slow
Here we go

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John W. McEwers 12 April 2010

I really like this poem. It sounds kind of Bluesy. But I think your structure is really cool.

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