Hiding Poem by Raquel Hayes

Hiding

Rating: 5.0


I am hiding from u.
I am hiding from me.
I am hiding from every thing that makes me weep;
I am scared, i am alone, i have no place that i can really call home.
I am an outcast every where i go.
I am a outcast to every one i know.
I have crying spells that never end.
This emptiness over comes my strength.
Sometimes i wonder how the world would be.
If there were just no me.
It wouldn't change, it would be the same,
I would always be hiding
I will always be afraid.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashley Davis 08 July 2009

this was so amazing. i felt this way before and at times i cry and never know when ill stop. i understand this poem and very touched. just want you to know that you are not alone. there are other people who feel like this too, I being one of them. Don't give up! things will work out and you'll be happy once again. Trust me when i say life sucks but it gets better in time, now when that time comes that things will look i can not tell you, but i can tell you if you think positive and never give in to that little voice that tells you that things probably wouldn't change if you weren't here, things will look up. keep writing its a good way to get out your emotions when you don't feel like actually speaking them to someone. i give u a 10!

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Majida Abdul Latif 08 July 2009

Amazing work beautiful peoma nd so touching. sometime we feel alone and scared because of things that we fear but ssuddely things happened and take us to the light. Keep writing.

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