Hearts Pound Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Hearts Pound



Deep down at the colors of orange
and brown. That spin me around. As
the leaves tumble down, striking
heart, touching ground. As heart
pounds, with the dance of lifes
sounds, and memories found. To our
Lord I bow, in whispers of thank
you now...

Sunday, July 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,gratitude,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 01 August 2018

As heart pounds, with the dance of lifes sounds, and memories found. To our Lord I bow, in whispers of thank you now.............so touching. Beautiful poem nicely executed.

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Rebecca Navarre 12 August 2018

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For such a beautiful and meaningful reply! .. Your poetry is such a inspiration, to all, in so many ways! .. Gratefully! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Aqua Flower 29 July 2018

I love all the rhyming and appreciation for life as it keeps the heart beating! Good write!

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Rebecca Navarre 12 August 2018

Thank you! .. Aqua flower, For such a kind and beautiful reply! .. I look forward to visiting your poetry page! .. I have been here and there, and a bit behind. But, do look forward to visiting! .. Thank you! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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