Neil Crosby

Rookie (December 10,1992 / Fort Knox, Kentucky)

Heartbroken - Poem by Neil Crosby

You saw my heartbreak
You never cared for me
My heart is gone, and you see
My heart hurts and aches
My heart is shattered
To you it never mattered
You only want me dead
I felt that dread
If you want me to die
I know you won't cry
You have no guilt in your mind
I want to commit suicide
Too late for a second chance
You broke that romance
Good bye
You should have guilt for your lie
In the end, my heart is broken, and I die.


Comments about Heartbroken by Neil Crosby

  • (9/15/2009 7:58:00 PM)


    Boy do i know how that feels. poem is awesome man. im sorry dude. (Report) Reply

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  • Tyease Collins (2/7/2009 3:53:00 PM)


    OMG the last like two lines were so GOOD. Geez i wish i would write like you.

    But yeah I've felt that depression of nobody wanting me, and i sometimes still feel it. But great poem

    -Tyease
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  • (12/26/2008 10:54:00 PM)


    Very Sad Neil. I'm Sorry Ur Hearts broken (Report) Reply

  • (7/2/2008 3:34:00 AM)


    great poem.its true, that i felt when i was heartbroken.i love this poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 26, 2008



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