Heart Is Beating With No Tune Poem by Rosalita Fern

Heart Is Beating With No Tune

Rating: 5.0


This heart I hear,
Is beating to no tune,
This heart is beating to nothing.
This heart is beating to no story
To no tune,
Liveless and still,
Empty and meaningless.
Nothing and Still.
I feel nothing,
My heart beats to no tune.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Hill 09 June 2009

I really like this...it seems with just a few words to capture the whole feeling of no feeling...............................

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This is most effective. I found the repetition of 'beat' gives the poem a beat of its own. A melancholy piece of good writing. 10 Karin Anderson

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