Heart Broken Poem by Dane Dino

Heart Broken

Rating: 2.8


Are you heart broken like me?
Even though you said we'd no longer be

Could I have been replaced
Or just permenatly erased?

I promised I'd love you forever
Just didn't know your love would quiver   

I thought we'd always be together
But you knew we weren't meant for each other

I would have never let you fall
But you never even cared about me at all 

The hardest thing I've ever had to do 
Was living this life without you  

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 10 August 2011

Bravo! Dino! A real heart touching write that clearly shows that Poetry runs in your blood! Every time I have the honor to read and fully enjoy reading well penned poems like yours, I feel like I have been transported back into the past! then I laugh and feel proud that I was able to move on and become a new me! Confession: the woman who broke my heart and devotedly I loved is the one that was hiding behind a colorful mask and now she became nothing more than MY MUSE! I wrote two poems that well define this unforgettable experience, one is titled: A BROKEN HEART and IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, I hope that if time permits, you would be able to read them! For your thought provoking write I give you 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented writes! Move on! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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