Head Poem by christina tina mcintosh

Head



i see a sign inside my head
and wondering if
im really dead
i look at you and all i see is you
looking back at me
all day long i sit and stare
and wondering if
im really there
all the people just stand and stare
can they really see me there
can they see whats in my head
oh bloody hell
then i must be dead...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bose Perumal 22 July 2010

dear poet you have come across a genuine experience! you are unconscious about this world but you have touched your conscience. Perhaps you are in for a deep concise experience. i hope you to find out the ethereal spirit in you and soften it to become conscious of your emotional and spiritual sojourn. may you come out with a wonderful cream and bread of life. 22/07/10 yours affectionately P.Bose Please would you mind to go through my poems written with the letter 'M' and it is in my name. i request your comments and views about the poems. thank you

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Bose Perumal 22 July 2010

dear poet you have come across a genuine experience! you are unconscious about this world but you have touched your conscience. Perhaps you are in for a deep concise experience. i hope you to find out the ethereal spirit in you and soften it to become conscious of your emotional and spiritual sojourn. may you come out with a wonderful cream and bread of life. 22/07/10 yours affectionately P.Bose Please would you mind to go through my poems written with the letter 'M' and it is in my name. i request your comments and views about the poems. thank you

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