He Broke Her Heart Thousand Pieces Apart Poem by Harindhar Reddy

He Broke Her Heart Thousand Pieces Apart

Rating: 5.0


She beams like golden moon
Venus is this lady tycoon
cupid's arrows stroke
She made youth go-around her and swoon
Yet left their souls crack and hearts broke.

Love stood in her core place
a Fafnir masked with human face,
thousand piece apart
He broke her heart, many dreams to chase,
She gave all yet love and lust depart

Her frantic fluttering
Wings that beat in futility
against harsh walls, ring
bells in her heart with no utility
for being trapped in cages with battering.



###Copyright © Harindhar Reddy @ 2015###

Wednesday, February 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Allegorose: is a shape poem created By chasingtheday of Allpoetry.
It is: Stanzaic: consisting of 3 quintet stanzas (a poem of 15 lines)
Syllabic: each stanza consisting of 6/8/5/10/9 syllables
Rhyme pattern: aabab ccdcd eefef
There is no metric requirement
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 05 February 2015

Beautiful write. Her frantic fluttering Wings that beat in futility against harsh walls, ring bells in her heart with no utility for being trapped in cages with battering. Beautiful presentation on broken heart. Loved reading it.

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Harindhar Reddy 19 May 2020

Thank for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Harindhar Reddy 19 May 2020

Thank for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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