Hands Poem by Tan Pratonix

Hands

Rating: 5.0


Hands, expressive hands;
The gold bands around your wrists
Make beautiful hands.

Touching
The soft underparts of your arms,
Hands.
Cupping
The cool mounds of your breast,
Hands.
Can love speak without hands?
Can love breathe without
Hands?

Hands clasping hands;
Smoothing the silk strands of your hair,
Hands.
Slipping
Down the warm wells of your skin,
Hands.

Breathe, beautiful hands,
Breathe a new joy into my love,
Envelopping her with
Hands.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charles Chaim Wax 02 February 2006

a gorgeous love poem the image seeping into the mind and holding it gently good work

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 02 February 2006

Wonderful and expressive. So much we take for granted. Without 'Hands' would we be just as sensitive to touch? Hmmm... L

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Philippa Lane 08 February 2006

I agree with Charles' Wax's comment. This a beautiful, emotive love poem written from an angle we rarely pay enough attention to. Congratulations!

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Evie Bryce 09 February 2006

pretty the repitition was done well

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William Jackson 11 February 2006

Sensuous and thought provoking.

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Melvina Germain 07 January 2008

Well the truth is we can love without hands but I love your depiction of what hands can do. Melvina

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Ruby Root 01 August 2006

Great Poem, Very sensual, take care.

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Lesa K 05 July 2006

Very well done! You have quite a way with words. : -)

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Ernest Mayer 12 May 2006

what beautiful poem. please make an e-book of ALL of your poems; more than a few would definitely appreciate it.

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Anna Cellmer 01 May 2006

Very nice poem which makes bright smile on my face :)

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