Rookie (16.03.89 / Doncaster, England)

Half The World - Poem by Daegal

Half the world lives,
Half the world makes,
Half the world gives
While the other half takes.

Half the world hates,
Half the world runs away,
Half the world's late,
Half the world praises the day.

Half the world is,
Half the world was,
Half the world thinks,
Half the world does.

Half the world lies,
Half the world burns,
Half the world cries
While the other half turns.

Half the world cares,
Half the world weeps,
Half the world shares,
Half the world keeps.

Half the world sings,
Half the world laughs,
Half the world brings,
Half the world tries to be the other half.


Comments about Half The World by Daegal

  • Rookie ian Hopkins (2/21/2012 5:20:00 PM)

    An unfortunate rip-off of the Rush song, Half the World, from their 1996 album Test for Echo. For all who enjoyed this poem, I recommend checking out the original. It's a great song.

    I hope your other poems are more unique, Daegal. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Irena Novicova (6/10/2009 5:56:00 AM)

    Your poem is awesome
    what else can I say.. =) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bianca Tini (10/26/2008 12:41:00 AM)

    Wow this is such a good poem i agree it just makes sense its really inspirational for me too write my own poems and understand how and what to write for class

    cudos (Report) Reply

  • Rookie MCKENZi : ] (2/12/2008 1:38:00 PM)

    i know i've commented on this poem before, but obviously not. i've read this soo many times. it just makes soo much sense. i love it! !
    great work: ] (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Golden Heart (1/21/2008 6:29:00 PM)

    interesting and cool, and powerful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! nice flow and beat! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! wonderful; @

    I'm a new poet so i only have one 'masterpiece' if i may say so myself, please give your comment to it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! thanksssss! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! again, great job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Straight 2 The Point (9/10/2007 12:42:00 AM)

    basically the U.S is all the above (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jennifer Duran (4/23/2007 4:16:00 PM)

    oh my gosh this is such a terrific poem and its unique i love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie meikhsj kaudisjhdsy (11/16/2006 8:43:00 PM)

    I really like this poems alot good job (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 17, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 16, 2010

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