Haiku- Series 2 Adjustments Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku- Series 2 Adjustments

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wet heart in the rain
silence was chosen prison
for a caged bird.

on a curled tight leaf
a dewdrop is adjusting
like prism at sunrises.

Thursday, December 15, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

‘Silence was chosen prison.." good metaphor. Nice poem. Loved

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Nosheen Irfan 16 December 2022

Your poetic finesse is illustrated beautifully. Always a pleasure to read you.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 December 2022

We must learn from the little dew drop. A person who can adjust with people, places and surroundings can survive in all climatic conditions. A brilliant poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 December 2022

One of yr best My friend Bravo Top5 Kudos and give us an Encore

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David Wood 15 December 2022

A pair of great Haiku's. Silence in indeed a prison every songbird should escape from.

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