Haiku Seldom Rhyme an Accepted Paradigm Poem by Jim McGill

Haiku Seldom Rhyme an Accepted Paradigm

Rating: 5.0

Haiku 6 to 8

6
Haiku seldom rhyme
An accepted paradigm

I ignore most time


7
Syllables you craft
Five, seven, five; what a laugh

I'm not good at math!


8
Slight hint of season
Cold now, it gets me sneezin'

My butt is freezin'

Saturday, January 13, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,rules
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 19 February 2024

You rule your own poem. And from your own rules you roam.You feel right at home.

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Rob Lamberton 19 February 2024

You feel right at home

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Rob Lamberton 19 February 2024

And from your own rules you roam

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Rob Lamberton 19 February 2024

You rule your own poem

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D.N. Rebb 14 January 2024

Hey, rules are made ro be broken. I enjoyed these rhyming haikus. There's probably a name for them somewhere already though.

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