Haiku- Life's Journey Poem by Renu Kakkar

Haiku- Life's Journey

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1. Feeling trapped in time,
looking to escape the situation.
A frog leaps to freedom.

2. Darkness engulfs my thoughts
makes me more and more melancholic.
Find a lit lamp to scatter light.

3. We all have problems
Life is nothing but lessons to be learned
Lessons not learned will need to be re-learnt.

4.Walk with me in the park
A learning experience it will be
Each plant will tell a different story.

5. The sea makes a sound
As waves dash against the shores
A sea shell captures all within.

renukakkar28.10.2016
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Spangenthal 28 October 2016

Even when the trial is hopeless, and the verdict's unavoidable, fresh life will go on, beautiful haiku.

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Renu Kakkar 28 October 2016

Thanks for the encouragement. I will be posting my poems regularly.

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Gajanan Mishra 28 October 2016

darkness engulfs my thoughts, but thoughts are far above darkness.

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Renu Kakkar 28 October 2016

You could be right. I wish to say thoughts one may have positive thought but sometimes these become negative due to circumstance.

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