Haiku: Leaves In The Autumn Poem by Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Haiku: Leaves In The Autumn



Leaves in the Autumn
Speading its crunchy carpet
To replace green grass

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 12 April 2008

The second line has only 6 syllables, the word 'spread is only one syllable. You also misspelled the word 'spread'. You wrote 'spead'. I love Autumn though, the colors are spectacular. Thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Madhubani, Bihar, India
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