Haiku Poem by Kathup Tsering

Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Long hazy day`s dreams
angel`s love resides within
the desired heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 29 May 2006

A very touching haiku Kathup, if you want to stick to the 17 sylables try desireous. Just a thought. Welcome to Poemhunter. I would advice not posting quite so many at one time, otherwise you will rattle the cages of the locals, it is difficult to crit or choose, where there are so many. Power to your pen. Tai

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Kathup Tsering

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Northern estern Tibet
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