Grave Confusion Poem by V P Mahur

Grave Confusion



Just a sight of my love
Convinced me
With a whisper
That all my dreams
Have come true with her
Shiny glitter
The colour of life
Changed like the weather
But it was only an image
That caused a blaze
In the cold dying heart
Now I have to live
With this painful dream
My heart cries for her
In a silent scream
Which cannot reach
Upto the loving beach
All the shouting waves
Of sorrow and loss
Absorb my calls
And the broken image
Of my own feelings
Are swimming
On the blood of my being
With every moving wave
I am being carried away
Into my love’s grave

Saturday, March 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Composed on March 23,014.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 22 March 2014

Very intense poem. With every moving wave I am being carried away into my love's grave. This line struck home with me, it is the feeling that makes us want to join the one we love, even though it be in the grave. Great poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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