Golden Verse Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Golden Verse

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your voices of golden verse
wake me up from the deep slumber
as coursed from the dream heartful
rousing the warmth of love endeared

As surfing the beach as morning delight
when awaiting the golden sun yet to rise
to delve the dew from the depth of night
love as yet dazzles across swaying of the leaf
as revered by the mist of the night.last

when you make your day promising bright
muses over morning to rave up the night
suave and serene yet in blazing the love
wishes to the sky reasoned by the blue moon.

let all your prayers be blossomed hue
and be sparkling like a fragrant rose
yet scattering like a rain in summer
quenching thirst of smile to the green

when each speckle of desire raved up yet
like flairs of a night in the full moon blue
with the beams of essence in ascension
being sheltered and safe yet reasoned too.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 29 October 2007

Dr. Suhendu Kar, this poem is a precious delight to read, most impressive in it's beauty. The beginning sets the stage for a most beautiful poem which certainly takes its beauty all the way through to the end. Simply marvelous, I love it. --Melvina--

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Thad Wilk 23 October 2007

Beautiful love poem Dr Kar! Good descriptive highlights. (10) ! Thad

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Dr subhendu kar

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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