Girl/Boy Poem by Amy

Girl/Boy

Rating: 2.8


Girl: Hey Baby, How have you been
Boy: Hey Hun, what do you mean?
Girl: Well you’ve been acting strange
Boy: I’ve been going through some change
Girl: Well, How so?
Boy: Some things have to go
Girl: What sort of things,
Boy: some stuff, bit off bling
Girl: Oh right I thought you meant me
Boy: oh, well that’s another thing, baby
Girl: what are you trying say?
Boy: I think we need to go our separate ways

And with that it was over, finished, done
Their true love was finally gone
She took it badly, went down the wrong path
But him, no he wasn’t daft
He met another in a matter of seconds
Whilst for her death had beckoned

July twenty seventh two thousand and eight
He had planned his wedding that date
But she had something else a due
For her, her life was finally through

He felt a sense, and with that he did run
Down the isle, ruined the fun
Ran to her bedside, shed a deep tear
For she was gone, as he had feared

He didn’t return to his beautiful bride
For his true and only love had sadly died
It was tough but it’s what he did decide
And every day he always cried

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kite Remedy 09 January 2009

expressive story, impressive poem after all.. nice work..

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Kesav Easwaran 30 December 2008

a very good piece...original and creative...i liked the dialogue and the narrative ending, though sad both...ten for you Amy

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