Ghazal English ~ Under The Sky. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Ghazal English ~ Under The Sky.

Rating: 5.0


Never offer your heart to any strangers
They will return it without heed, under the sky.

In the lonely nights, if you look at the moon restively,
Thousand thoughts will rush in, under the sky.

In that pompous but empty world, there isn't a cacophony,
Don't let the waves rush towards the shore, under the sky.

When it rains, run and yell aloud,
Nobody will see your tears, under the sky.

Find the flow in your life and mould it into reality,
Life will find solace and calmness, under the sky.

Never leave yourself open to this world, O' Asim,
People will misuse your simplicity, under the sky.

Saturday, February 19, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: ghazal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shreya Hacks 19 February 2022

Fantastic...People will misuse your simplicity, under the sky.

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Gordon Walter 19 February 2022

Excellent couplet. When it rains, run and yell aloud, Nobody will see your tears, under the sky.

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Deepak S S 19 February 2022

Class ghazal. I liked it

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me poet yeps poet 19 February 2022

BEAUTIFUL GHAZAL A 5 POINTER FROM ME Dr ASIM JI

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 February 2022

loved the last two lines

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Rebecca Navarre 23 February 2022

Wow! .. Extremely beautiful and ever so heart moving! .. So amazingly painted! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 21 February 2022

Never leave yourself open to this world, O' Asim, People will misuse your simplicity, under the sky. Meaningful Ghazal ....10

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Nabakishore Dash 20 February 2022

Well written dear poet.but only the evil would misuse your simplicity.

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Ricky Mangathen 20 February 2022

Fabulous ghazal

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Juhaina Tumlu 20 February 2022

Well composed ghazal. Adorable.

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