Getting By Poem by Sandra Feldman

Getting By

Rating: 5.0


Living in a Cloud Burst
Of Emotions,
All my life,
A fantasy
Make believe,
Even in poetry,
Will only give,
Momentary euphory,
Not ever,
The superb fulness
Of Forever
If ever, a happy,
True reality,
You've missed.

Tuesday, August 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: realisation,truth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 06 August 2020

And so is life. Though we say things are in our hand but in actual they are not. We are bound by fate. One should accept the situation and learn to enjoy. Thoughtful poem 10 ++

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Deluke Muwanigwa 04 August 2020

You are in a safe place living in the bubbly bubble of poetry. You can create your own world with words. Nice short higher life type poem. Dont burst the bubble

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 August 2020

A poignant and touching poem. So very true. A make believe life will just give us a fleeting happiness, . An insightful well conveyed write.

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