From My Window. Poem by Michael Walker

From My Window.

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It suits me down to the ground,
on the second floor of the motel
with a view through a window of opportunity,
down Great North Road to Lynmall
this stormy Sunday in mid-winter,
when people need their umbrellas, hurrying
to the bus stop or the railway station,
going mostly downhill to the destination.


I see a few firs, elms, a lone palm tree,
which frame the motel with green and amber.
A new apartment block on the skyline
is charcoal and amber, with white columns.
That complex is an aesthetic delight,
rising between trees...but above all that.


-29 May,2016.

From My Window.
Saturday, June 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: travel
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I recently stayed in this Auckland motel, which I liked. In the last line, I am implying that the modest high-rise building is more beautiful than the trees of green monotony. I wrote in the Italian sonnet form: an octet and sestet, with a thought break (volta) at line 9. There is some rhyme, but no rhyme scheme.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 27 January 2017

Constant Continuous Travel: Awaking Not Knowing Location Whereabouts entering rooms with expectations in travel experiences is best by day always with view clear perspectives to appreciate new surroundings unless in a city where night lights call begging endless investigations; constant travel streaming continuous fogs reference braincell orientations changing climate locations countries daily in places endless new experiences awaking not knowing location whereabouts in tour tourist backpacker kaleidiscopic experiences; Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'From My Window' by the poet Michael Walker. Dedicated to the poet Michael Walker.

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Terry Craddock 09 January 2017

'It suits me down to the ground, in a motel, a room with a view through a window of opportunity, ' entering rooms with expectations in travel experiences is always best by day, with the view clear to appreciate new surroundings, unless in a city where night lights call begging endless investigations

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Michael Walker 26 January 2017

You are so right about night and day. Michael.

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