Friends From An Enemy Country Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Friends From An Enemy Country

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Friends are here as well
and they are lovely and nice.
Friends I have all over the world,
from countries that are neither friendly
nor our enemies.
They are lovelier and nicer.
But who is loveliest and nicest?
Friends from a country
I have never met
I have never talked
with whom we have fought a number of wars
with whom I exchange love through websites.
These amazing friends
make me sure
love is above all the hates,
and one day these friendships
will rise as the clouds.
It will rain on both sides
It will wash the dirt of hate.
On a tree of love
with new green leaves
and multicolor flowers
birds will sing and dance together
and we all shall see an incarnated dove,
crowned as the queen of lasting love.

Friends From An Enemy Country
Monday, September 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqua Flower 17 September 2018

Beautifully said....the last two lines ending this wonderfully written poem sums it up perfectly! Thank you for shring this and many hope one day your poem will come true.

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Bharati Nayak 17 September 2018

These amazing friends make me sure love is above all the hates, and one day these friendships will rise as the clouds. It will rain on both sides It will wash the dirt of hate. On a tree of love with new green leaves and multicolor flowers birds will sing and dance together and we all shall see an incarnated dove, crowned as the queen of lasting love. - - - - - - What an amazing poem! My thought resonates with this very thought.

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Rajnish Manga 17 September 2018

A lovely poem devoted to love and friendship which go beyond territorial boundaries. Let us hope these sentiments become a reality soon. Amen! Thanks, Akhtar sahab.

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Rajnish Manga 17 September 2018

Just read 'The Treasure Of Life' a poem by Olive Walters. Following lines convey the same message quite eloquently: With many a set back / We'll find hard to bear It's love and true friendship / That will help us to care

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 September 2018

A wonderful poem on friendship that conquers boundaries and race. All lines of this poem convey beautiful thoughts and sentiments that foster unity and brotherhood. Beautifully crafted . Superbly penned.10+++ and on to my Poem List.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 23 April 2020

- - " Maiñ te meri jaan shaudaai ikko jahe Doveiñ aeñ nadān shaudāi ikko jahe." S.Sartaaj

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 23 April 2020

The pigeon will sour over the two! AMEEN! " Assiñ larr v laine a pichhoñ bollī dā Phir mannan ate manaun da mauqa tohli da, Hind te Pakistān shaudāi ikko jahe Doveiñ aeñ nadān shaudāi ikko jahe." - Dr. Satinder Sartaaj

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2018

On a tree of love with new green leaves and multicolor flowers birds will sing and dance together and we all shall see an incarnated dove, crowned as the queen of lasting love.......nice poetic expression. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thank you dear Jawad Ji for sharing this gem.10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 September 2018

O ho ho! Akhtar Sahab! This is a wonderful poem that crosses man made boundaries. May your words come true! On a tree of love with new green leaves and multicolor flowers birds will sing and dance together A great poem of friendship with a beautiful image.........10

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 September 2018

sing and dance together work together believe together live together love together ...... united soul the friendship is no enemy think everyone please

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