Friends Poem by Allie Lusha

Friends

Rating: 5.0


As we sat on the hilltop
Looking down over the dales
The sky is blue
But, a few clouds shadowed the vales
I looked your way
You were deep in thought
You look so troubled
All tense and fraught
It wasn’t the time
For us to talk
But I wished I could read your mind
And banish all your troubles away
So you could just enjoy
This beautiful day
The grasses swayed,
To and fro in the gentle breeze
Way up on high the Skylark warbles
his earlier reprise.
I take your hand and give it a squeeze
I look into your eyes and smile
Maybe just for a moment
Just for a little while.
You’ll take comfort
Knowing for you I’ll always be there
and you’ll notice the beautiful day
That we’ve begun to share
Still sitting on the hilltop
Looking down to the dales
The sky is blue
The clouds have lifted from the vales
Like the lines that made you frown
I look your way
And you turn to me and say
My god what a beautiful day
Look a Skylark
I smile

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Blevins 28 September 2009

This, i think is my favorite poem ever! Honestly, it is one of the best I have ever read! It reminds of me of so many times when I was with friends that I was very fond of and very happy to be with, and they were just troubled or preoccupied or something. And I would just wish that I could make them as happy as they make me, that they could appreciate this moment together as much as I did. Amazing job Allie! You are one of my favorite poets! : D ~

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Like the lines that made you frown I look your way And you turn to me and say My god what a beautiful day Look a Skylark I smile darn timezones I wish I could've stayed on and read all of your poems... some serious wordsmithery here

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