Fresh Mind Poem by Irvan Hermawan Saichu

Fresh Mind

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I ran hard and soft feel exposure to the wind in the hair
Then I stared at the blue sky and breathe in calm morning air
Complained to silence my soul
My soul is fused with the surrounding nature
Scroll started to feel the sweat on your cheek
As an increasingly loud noise my breath
The symbol of harmony began to be seen from the rocking coconut-palm beach
The symbol of peace began to be created from sea water bubbles
I ran faster again
Log into the dance waves
Sea water splashing on a thin skin of the face
The cool ocean water seep in pore
The line of sea and sky as if calling
Daring me to swim to get there
But the sun appeared between the two
Made me understand that
Why I do not need to swim to get there
Because of my false choices
I swam to the edge again
I gallop on a white sand again
Enjoying the fresh morning air and left the lush green leaves
Ran ran
Because I want these fresh minds awake forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 13 May 2014

Hermawan I like this poem.nicely done

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