Freedom Poem by Sylvia Thomas

Freedom

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Whilst your soul dances,
beneath the cradle of heaven's stars,
the tall grass gently caresses
your ankles.

With the hand,
that is bound by no chains,
And the eyes,
that see the heavens the skies behold.

Neither the cloud,
that flows in a rhythmic pattern
Nor the bird
who is set off course by another.

You are the wind,
You are the one,
to control your own fate,
because you are free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 July 2008

A good theme with excellent diction.........

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Silvia Thomas 07 September 2006

erm...Steve..my name's not wendy. thanks for your comment anyway!

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Steve Hagget 07 September 2006

Hi Wendy - I love this poem - another great concept with well woven language. Tnaks Steve

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Aashish Ameya 07 September 2006

simply gr8 thought..love this poem...

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