1
(the poet)
The readers
Leave the poet
Melting alone
To mould
A unique poem
2
(The reality and fantasy)
Life is continuing
In its Utopia
But the days are
Dying
Without ID
3
(Love)
Flowers know
How many days they will live
And the nightingale
as it sings knows
how many seasons
but we
cut the rose
to wear on the lapel of a tuxedo
and put the nightingale
in a cage
even though
they still make
us smile
4
(the news)
In the lovely village of Corripo
in the mountains of Switzerland
only twelve elders are living.
In the town of Novi Becej, Serbia
the zinc rate in the drinking water
has reached 27 times the legal limit.
In the Smithsonian zoo,
hundreds of people are
waiting for a baby panda
to be born.
Then you switch off the TV
and the first line of the
first book you pick up:
"this life is full of difficulties"...
These 4 poems show tremendous range of talent. I no more say " ah, this poem is the best" than I read the next poem and think wow-he went even deeper and more lyrical and on it goes and when I reach the last powerful and challenging poem, I have to acknowledge that this poet has range and power and talent to burn. 10+++++++ and onto my fav poem list and my fav poet list
Dear great poet forever Susan, I do not know how to thank you for all your amazing words about my poems, only I can say that: the beauty is in the eye of the beholder, this lovely comment showing me how deep you are looking inside the poem and always exploring new aspects of the works and not every readers can be active during the reading to share with the poet writing skills and understanding the poems in this unique and fantastic way as you do, many thanks again and Kind regards
Four brilliant and one of a kind poems depicting the intricacies and aspects of life. Each and every poem has been crafted so beautifully with powerful lines and great imagery.
All 4 poems bear the originality of its author- - 10++++++++ and onto my fav list where a lot of their brother and sister Soran poems sit all of them thought-provoking and bearing the unique style of Soran- - -
Flowers know How many days they will live And the nightingale as it sings knows how many seasons but we- - - - - - - - - - - > yes- -the " but we" inserts itself into the natural way of the earth God created and asserts its will - -the " but we" has been inserted and asserted way too many times leading now to the desperate straits our planet is now in- - - -10++++++++++
2 (The reality and fantasy) Life is continuing In its Utopia But the days are Dying Without ID- - - -you pose the difficult questions, Soran, leading your readers to think of things they have never thought of before- -I know my days at this end of life need the calendar to mark their passage- too many of my days die now without having lived, without any difference to the day before and the day before that- - - 10++++++
Dear: Rose Marie Juan-austin, hello and thanks.. after when I read your comments I came to conclusion that your eyes are very beautiful and your heart is so pure, that is why you are commenting such beautifully on my humble poems, I wish you all the best..I hope you enjoy reading good poems..
" The readers Leave the Poet Melting alone To mould a unique poem" Incredible lines of a great poem. Excellent write. Top Marks! ! Onto my Poem List.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Seasons and reasons! ! Muse of life with, The romance of nature! ! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
thanks Edward that is the essential part has been chosen by you, good spot...your comments is valuable to me..