East and west
Then north and south
Directions four these
Thus four people say…
Walk from east
Arrive on east
Parallels converge
Curvaceous these
Fours apart
One line exists
A line that goes up
Vertically straight
Line upright
This, not to meet
On any point
Just valid or right
People wise
Say ‘line negate’
You need not agree
You can choose upright…
ps: your votes on your comment lines, please...
22 07 08
Now, here is something to really think about. I find you do a lot of dep thinking and come out with great lines as these. You give occassion for celebration of thoughts and this is what a true poet must and should do. Thank you for your contribution to humanity....arya
10 for your fascinating thoughts. You have a way with words. Kind regards, Sandra
A brilliant write worth to ponder about. Very interesting and grips the reader from start to the very end. A one of a kind write.
A wise write, inviting and provocating to ponder deep, lines both visible and, do play some games with us, parallels do converge, when lines stand imperfectly. The four directions are there to make great room for us, upward mobility is indeed more desirable than horizontal one, a beautiful write with material for mental excercise!
a diffrent poem very intersting i wish i can rate but i dont see that rate bar bit a 10
u have a very different form of writing things.... this write has lots of lines between the lines..... :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A capturing write Kesav! Though with these wise ones i must agree Counterbalance sounds right to me! *10*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad