Kumud Ranjan

Rookie (8th July / India)

Forever - Poem by Kumud Ranjan

Nowhere till far you were in my sight
It was a dark night, horrible and lonely
I tried hard to sleep, but I couldn’t
Your memories make me paralyzed

Pacified I was as incidents ran into my mind
Why you left me? I haven’t ever thought of
I was wrong, but I love you that u know too
I’d have changed myself if you’d have waited for

I know I’m not the perfect match for you my dear
But you used to be proud of me, loving me ever
Perhaps you were not wrong, it was my fate
I know you love me n would love me till end

You’ll still be there whenever I need you
I’m sure of your affection would never faint
I have no complaints, cause its love dear
Call me whenever in need, for you I’m forever…

Comments about Forever by Kumud Ranjan

  • Rookie Jen Capaldi (10/9/2009 6:56:00 PM)

    a wonderful poem of unrequited yet still a singly devoted love. well thought out and nicely written. very heartfelt and sincere. again an enjoyable read my friend! 10++
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  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (10/8/2009 1:04:00 PM)

    Forever is a powerful word
    I like this words (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Costa Anakiev (8/16/2009 1:30:00 PM)

    well written though I can't say it touches me much (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Not A Dream Choice (8/16/2009 10:20:00 AM)

    very beautiful and clear like water ;) read mine too pls ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (8/16/2009 10:15:00 AM)

    Such a beautiful and heartfelt poem...Nice read i had! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mubeen Sadhika (8/16/2009 9:53:00 AM)

    Beautifully narrated. Nice composition. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Shekhar Joshi (8/15/2009 10:47:00 AM)

    Your memories left me feel paralyzed.........you need to omit 'feel' from this line..
    also in the last line it should be whenever 'in' need.........

    fine work........... ;) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 15, 2009

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