Follow Me Poem by Rob cote

Follow Me



Follow me lonely redemtion I can not seek
These eyes wont stop staring at me
The whispears I heaR give me fear
I can only feel evil growing near

This Sharp pain wont keep me restrained
Blood dripping on the floor..
Feeling worse then ever before
All my thoughts of her flood out the door

my hearts near its last pump
any second now it wont thump
Before I go I want you to know
that in the end our love
Was my the best thrill

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 03 August 2009

The whispears I heaR give me fear I can only feel evil growing near my hearts near its last pump any second now it wont thump 2 beautiful lines. They have such an impact on me. for ive lived them firsthand. you should really keep what you write. its pretty good

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Jessica Robert 30 June 2009

Incredible and interesting. I found myself curious until the end. Very nicely written, I can't imagine why you don't keep what you write. H&K's Jess* <3

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Arabian Heart 03 June 2009

A vibrant beat To live only for the moment until the last breath Was It worth it for the rush? Let me hear more from you.

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