Follow Father Soon Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Follow Father Soon

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Father is spreading boon,
Awake! Follow father soon.
Father is teaching letter,
You all soon learn better.

His words are ever sweeter,
He brings in love laughter.
Father loves more and teach,
You come on feel soul each.

Many wander to do follow,
They keep head over a pillow.
Below they watch and say,
Hold is coming from far ray.

Where to move on you tell?
Time is suddenly ringing bell.
Birth and death are uncertain,
Life further sorrow does contain.

He is father who is our saviour,
He is our only eternal mentor.
Relationship with him is noon,
Awake, all follow father soon.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,19 December 2014. All rights reserved.

Wednesday, October 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is written on 19 December 2014 and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2016

picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xAmen. Very nice 19 Dec 2014 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of G. Akanji Olaniyi xGood one, here! ! ! 19 Dec 2014 by G. Akanji Olaniyi | Reply

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Heather W.B. 22 October 2020

God's every law is unique. His laws are wonderful. We should feel his mercy and beauty. We should love each soul obeying his command. He is saviour and eternal mentor. We should not leave his hands. This poem has deep philosophy. I tried to understand well.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 November 2019

Sweet words of peace and love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

We should follow God. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 September 2018

A marvelous spiritual write that conveys the eternal love of God. I agree entirely with this write. Liked.the last stanza. It expresse all 10 ++++++

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 19 October 2016

His words are ever sweeter, He brings in love laughter. Father loves more and teach, You come on feel soul each. - I loved these lines, thanks for sharing poet.

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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